The Bungalow (?)
Assalaaaaaamualaikum-
N Hey Hi @! It have been a while since we leave six grade n
I-not-like-missing writing, but I hav one of my stories dat i hav written till
the middle but i hav decided to stop :P Wat a waste right? But I would like to
share with u awesome ppl in my blog. But If u Dare to Read it---It's a scary
story...Well, might be just read it first... Im not finish with dat remember.
But if U think it's gud pls COMMENT xD... So here it goes...
P.S.
I haven’t found a title for it yet but if it match wat u think in ur mind about
this story, pls suggest it for me ^-~. For me it might even practice typing...N
READERS BELIEVE ME I WRITE THIS STORY...is not dat i copied it. It's my
"imagination". I learn how to write story in sixth grade Jwww
THE
BUNGALOW
It was the month of October, when Mr. Harold's
family moved to a stiff bungalow near the Street of Yukon. The bungalow had
3levels, a garage, and a basement. The first level was next to the garage. In the
first level, there are rooms for living room, dining room, kitchen and a
bathroom. The second level had 3 rooms. Each room had 3 beds, 3 closets, and a
bathroom. Except one room that had a queen bed, a closet, and a bathroom. Of
course that is for parents. The third level is the attic where storage should
go. The basement is placed underground. The door to basement is the outside of
the bungalow. The outside of the bungalow is just look like a stiff bungalow
but inside.....nobody knows.
Mr. Harold and Mrs. Harold had 6 children, 3 boys and 3
girls. The first in the sibling was Daniel, then Angela, then a twin sisters-
Mariana and Marini, and the last in the sibling was a twin brothers- Gray and
Gary. They all are between 8-15 years old. Not to mention, just figure out
their ages. The naughtiest in the sibling was Daniel.
The neighbors along the Street
of Yukon were not very friendly. They all close their house windows when they
first come to the street. Nobody come to greet then either. The street was
quiet, only Mr. Harold family's bungalow was noisy.
"Wow!" exclaimed the 6
children while squeezing all together at the entrance of the bungalow. They all
race up the stair to choose their room while Mr. and Mrs. Harold bringing their
bags inside. There where the scary part began.............
They have shared the room
together. The rooms with 3 beds and 3 closets make it even to make as boys'
room and girls' room. And their parent took the other room. That night, they night
sleep early because they have to do some cleaning in the morning.
When it reaches to
midnight, Mariana woke up. She yawned. Suddenly, she heard a noise coming from
the stairs. She began to panic. She wondered, "Is that one of my
siblings? If it were they don't wake up at midnight...."
"Eik-eik-eik-eik,"
the wooden stairs sounded as someone was stepping on it.
"Eee.....eee...hehe,"
another sound was played. Mariana always believe in ghosts but her siblings
couldn't believe it.
She started to wake Marini."
Ma...ma...Maria...Ni...mmm...," she wake Mariani up as she began to cry of
fear. But Marini didn't wake up. She just replied, "What, what?! What is
it?" then fall back to sleep.
Mariana tried to be brave to peek outside of the room
herself. She began taking her steps slowly to the door with her blanket
wrapping her. She stopped.
"I
can't...." she thought nervously.
"Eik-eik-eik-eik,"
the sound repeated as it was coming closer and faster. Mariana thought of
waking up her big sister. “Eee...eee...hehe," the other sound repeated too.
"Angela...Angela...Angela..." Mariana tried.
Finally her big sister woke up. "What, Mariana? Did
you want me to go somewhere with you?" Angela asked pretending like her mother.
“Did...did you hear the noise outside the room?" asked Mariana back,
trembling.
"I didn't hear anything," replied Angela, walking
to the door and opening it. She peeked her head on the door looking outside.
Slowly, she came back to her bed and says, “Nothing, Mariana just go to back to
sleep, sis." Gently, Mariana lied on her bed and tried to forget
everything she heard. She wheezed and covered her head so she can't hear or see
anything that scares her anymore.
Once Mariana had fallen asleep back again, Gray in the the
boys' room then woke up. Gray particularly wakes up because he wants to go to
the bathroom. As he usually, caused problem when the family is travelling.
Gray was known as scaredy-cat similar to Mariana while ago. But he didn't
believe in ghosts thought. So, he set to get up his big brother, who called
him Pink instead of Gray.
"Daniel, Daniel can you send me to the bathroom and wait
outside?" Gray whispered to Daniel's ear. "What do you want,
Pink?" Daniel replied with his lazy voice.
"Can you send me to the bathroom?" repeated Gray.
"Just forget it and it will be gone..." answered
Daniel and slept. Gray can't wait no longer, so he planned to wake his twin
brother up.
"Gary, Gary, Gary, please wake up?! I need to go to
the bathroom..." Gary exclaimed rushingly. Gary, rubbing his eyes, gets up
quickly and waited outside the bathroom door as Gray entered.
"Please be quick, Gray. I want to sleep," said Gray
yawning. Minutes later Gray in the bathroom, washing his hand and face, he
looked at the mirror. Surprisingly, behind him he say an ugly looking girl with
a bloody white dress, and her hair which is longer that covers her whole body
which go with her bubbly skin; staring at him through the mirror with her red
eyes.
"Ghost!" Gray whispered looking at the mirror.
He turns to his back and the illusion disappeared, he shooed his
head. He doesn’t believe what he had seen. He quickly open the door and when
out. When Gray got out of the bathroom, he saw......
TO BE CONTINUED>>>>>
How
is it :S Watdayyathink? Yea...I no it's boring K But hope u got some scary part...Well Bye Bye then I shall
continue if u guys wanted but...Later Dud..
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